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Indifference

Indifference to others
saddens the heart,
interference of another
weakens the mind,
intolerance to others
destroys the soul,
caring of others
gladdens the heart,
support of others
strengthens the mind,
tolerance of all
opens up your soul,
to a kinder way of life.

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My creed that I try to live by..........
Written August 18th, 2004

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  • cutiepie gold member
    September 3, 2004
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    Thank you Yes I agree with you.It was kind of you to write nice words


  • trumpetfalcon silver member
    September 2, 2004
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    While I believe we must hate the sin in people, we must never hate the sinner himself. And as no one is perfect, what does that say Wonderful creed to live by. All my best to you


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 21, 2004
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    Thank you


  • kotalu
    August 20, 2004
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    you said it! Great write

  • cutiepie gold member
    August 18, 2004
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    Lol, trust you to say something like that especially when I've got my happy hat on today Thanks for the comments,


  • wattle silver member
    August 18, 2004
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    All true of cause Ms Cutie. But too much of this and you finish up borrowing your wheelbarrow from some 'friend' when they are not actually needing of it - ha ---- nice write I like thank you.


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 18, 2004
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    Thank you also thanks for your kind comments


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 18, 2004
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    You are most welcome, I am glad you enjoyed this


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 18, 2004
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    Thank you I am glad you enjoyed this poem


  • LadyUnique silver member
    August 18, 2004
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    the truth simply said. could we put this up in times square for all to see??
    geez if only people would wake up!
    great write and thanks for sharing!

  • MtnGirl98 silver member
    August 18, 2004
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    woohoo! you said it! its so sad that some people dont see this and live their lives in ways that not only hurt others but hurt themselves. its a pity. great write.


  • Beyond Broken
    August 18, 2004
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    That is so true. I love it. I especially like the last few lines. I love the truth in this. Great work. Thanks for sharing this.

    ~shari~

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