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The Fog And The Androids

You call me Houdini, and dare me to escape
Tempt me no more, watch me contemplate
Just what it is that I don't trust
Trust about myself...
I find some solace in my
Crack-backed friends
Upon the shelf

Because, I'm sick of you
I'm tired of me
Mirror on the wall won't let me see
Just what it is that keeps me down
Kneeling with clenched fists upon the ground

You don't call me no more
Was it something that I said?
Like the fact that "you're a heartless android
Without a head..."
I'm sorry that you take things
Completely out of frame
Not to mention all your answers
Were nonce for gain

Because, I'm sick of you
I'm tired of me
Mirror on the wall won't let me see
Just what it is that keeps me down
Kneeling with clenched fists upon the ground

Remember when I loved you?
I even loved myself
Such a wicked fantasy made
To project false wealth
But as the fog cleared,
The lighthouse shone through
I spoke over my shoulder "I'm through with you".

Because, I'm sick of me
I'm tired of you
Mirror on the wall won't let me see
Just what it is that keeps me down
Kneeling with clenched fists upon the ground

You call me Houdini, and dare me to escape
Tempt me no more just watch me contemplate

Because, I'm sick of you
I'm tired of me
Mirror on the wall won't let me see
Just what it is that keeps me down
Kneeling with clenched fists upon the ground
Just what it is that keeps me down
Out of the fog, clarity's found.

Author notes

Take a listen to the song

gangbox.com/mp3/Fog%20and%20Androids.mp3

Please feel free to buy my book
and cd's at my various links at any time
Written August 18th, 2004

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  • Inscrutable
    August 30, 2004
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    Yeah, yeah, I'll buy it all eventually.

    Nice one.
    I especially love the heartless android without a head part. And the crack-backed friends part.


  • horus8 gold member
    August 27, 2004
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    August 27, 2004
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    August 27, 2004
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  • Barbie
    August 27, 2004
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    Erm, is it a bad thing to want to use the word 'gorgeous' to describe this? Oh feck it, who cares. This is gorgeous. Nicely done. Barbie. Xx

  • horus8 gold member
    August 25, 2004
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    thanks mum, I wrote them for a friend.
    I'm much more up-beat, lol


  • AnnD Moderators member
    August 25, 2004
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    Don't beat yourself up so.
    you have wonderful qualities.
    acknowledge them and be proud.
    we love you.even if you don't like yourself at times.

    A good write.
    Mum


  • August 23, 2004
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    Full of self-doubt and insecurity. Well done.

    Much respect,
    Sarah


  • dottedmyeyes
    August 22, 2004
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    i like the chorus a lot. i didnt neccessarily like the ending. over-all the song was impressive.
    lyssa


  • August 19, 2004
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    love me. please love me.


  • S A Adelmann
    August 18, 2004
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    Interesting stab at lyrics. I think you may have misused "nonce" - near as I can tell from the context. I think that with work this might not be a half bad song.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    August 18, 2004
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    Don't hate yourself hun.. ever.. you are a beautiful man
    Mirror, mirror on the wall..
    Don't let your ego,trip you and fall
    I love you.. no matter how much you turn up the heat,turn down your silence.. turn off and on.. fawcett me to the river wide.. let me open up on the other side
    I'm so in love


    ~GILL~xxxxxxxxxxxx

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