Anonymous thoughts, resounding
loudly, into fractions of a
minute. Driving, earnestly, all
thoughts of a quiet time
to another space; Another
dimension deep, inside a
once silent place.
Ramblings, shuffle to the
forefront, waiting for release;
Pouring forth, it's volume,
till comprehension allows
fulfillment and gratification.
Peace, gentle peace, reigns
for what seems, like forever;
Till, the peace slowly drifts
away, summoning, the anonymous
thoughts, once again.
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A Rambling of thoughts.
Written August 17th, 2004
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Yes, I'm all about the ramblings..You know some ramblings are rockstars now..Maybe we'll hit it big with the thoughts we jot, think about it!
Thanks for sharing, shine on! 
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Thank you 
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hello cutiepie, thankyou for the comments on Weeping Willow, of course I will retusn the favour. Your poem on ramblings was a joy to read.We all have millions of thoughts everyday that go nowhere, yous, at least found an outlet. well done
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Lol... you do make me smile, and it is much appreciated,
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Rambling is always good for the soul, let the thoughts get their hiking boots on and roam the fields, watch out for the muddy bits, it is a pain cleaning boots after a long haul.
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Mary I write as I feel, so sometimes nothing rhymes ( Im not too good with rhyme) But I love the freedom we get here to write how we feel and say it in a way that we are comfortable with. Thank you for your comments, they are much appreciated
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i this was well written and well put together. I like it's flow and the way it din't have to have perfect rhymn to make sence. Great write and read hope to see more soon.
luv buches,
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I think that this was a very well written poem... Good job at putting it together... I really liked the flow of the words... I love ramblings lol... I ramble all the time... Great write!
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Hmmm, I seem to have a million such moments every day. Poetry, to me, represents the orderly world, the civilized world. It's always interesting to write about chaos, about randomness. A well-written poem.
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Thank you I am glad you liked it
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Yeah!!! The first comment person!!! I feel special... Great Write!!! keep up the good work!!!!
~Sara~
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