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Rainstorm

Rapid Raindrops
Outline the horizon,
Bringing solitude
To the lonely.

Black clouds
Hide the sun,
Bringing darkness
To the depressed.

Rays of sunshine
Fall down upon the forgiven,
Bringing life
To the dead.

And once again
A new life is born,
Bringing happiness
To the beholder.

Author notes


Written August 17th, 2004

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  • EidolonDesires
    August 23, 2004
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    This poem is beautiful...


  • Andu
    August 20, 2004
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    This was nice, I like the way you divided each stanza in two and drew parallels between nature and humanity. very well written too, nice job!