Throughout life you see many vibrant colors,
in your mind things are seen black or white,
somethings you will definitely agree upon,,
sometimes you'll know something is not right.
The white clouds in the sky seem so peaceful,
believe in God and in Heaven you'll rejoice,
not to believe may land you down in Hell,
it's black or white you have to make a choice.
As a young man you're starting on a journey,
one road will take you for a bumpy ride,
you will find much unhappiness and pitfalls,
if your companion is not God by your side.
If you invite God along for your journey,
your life will fill with wonders to behold,
happiness and joy will engulf your lifetime
being a part of the greatest story ever told.
So make your choice between black or white,
will it be God or the Devil for you and me,
I don't know if you'll choose Heaven or Hell,
I chose God in Heaven, it's eternity for me.
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God OR Denil Black or White Good or Evil Heaven or Hell
LifeSpan by Andu
untitled by Bonzo
Written August 17th, 2004
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and to comment on it. I wasn't to sure either about God and the Devil when I joined this website in June. Then I met a wonderful young man on here. I write about him on my author's page. Take care, Sandy
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Good or bad, we have the choice each and every day of our lives, we all are a mixture of both, I feel. A good poem, I am not so sure as to God and The Devil, but I keep my mind open as much as possible
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Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem.
Take care, Sandy
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nice write, nicely contrasting, great message. I really like this, it spoke to me. Well done, and good luck with the contest, and thanks for entering.
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1 and 5 excellent controdiction, the others needs more. But all in all, this is very very good. well done
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Nicely contrasting
If you were looking for opposites I think you certainly found them in this poem. The contrasts are very effective. Keep writing
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Your very welcome Sandy.
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read my poem and the nice comment.I love writing poems about God now. Take care, Sandy
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Thank for commenting on my poem and also for making me feel better about my bunder with the deleted poems. I do hope you feel better, Take care, Sandy
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Yeah, it's all by choice, is completely right. I'm currently listening to an Audiobook called 'Black' and it has to deal with good vs. evil, I think. I haven't finished it yet, but it is really great! And so is this poem!
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This is a great, true write. I love it, said so well. Great job, I wish I had something more profound to say. very well done.
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