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Father, Please Forgive Me


Father, please forgive me
For what I am about to do
I can no longer handle what I have been through
Please forgive me

Father forgive me, for I have sinned
I cannot forgive those who trespassed on my soul
These thoughts I have, I cannot control
Please forgive me

Father, forgive me, for I have sinned
The hatred I have goes too deep within
I am waging a war I will never win
Please forgive me

Father, forgive me, for I have sinned
I keep fighting a battle I know I have lost
They keep abusing me, no matter the cost
Please forgive me

Father, forgive me, for I have sinned
The love I lost has killed me inside
You were oblivious to all the tears that I cried
Please forgive me

Father, forgive me, for I have sinned
My angels have left me, the evil returned
You would think by now that I would have learned
Please forgive me

Father, forgive me, for I have sinned
I had done my best, but it was not enough
While others may be, I am not that tough
Please forgive me

Father, forgive me, for I have sinned
I took a life, but it was my own
I'm damned to Hell, to be forever alone
Please forgive me

Father, please forgive me
For what I have done
The Devil himself has apparently won
Please forgive me

Author notes

it speaks for itself
Written August 17th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • Destin2B
    December 19, 2004
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    this is awesome!!! i love it great write ~ley~


  • starrynightangel54
    October 19, 2004
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    oooo this is outstanding! awesome poem! i hope u feel happiness soon. luv from horsecrazy


  • Jessa
    August 24, 2004
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    thank you very much sconeboy and thank you for stopping by to check out this poem. i appreciate it!

  • Sconeboy
    August 23, 2004
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    Blimey...this is a really good poem. When it first loaded it seemed long...but that's just from all the comments yeh have on this :-P

    Hey, I like it so much, yeh get an applause. Anyway, thanks for looking at my work, and keep writing so well ^_^

  • LostParamour
    August 18, 2004
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    Thanks for entering my contest... Good luck!!! I'll make meaningful comments when I judge the poems... I'm just thanking everybody for entering right now...

  • BHSpoet
    August 17, 2004
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    very nice I can see you are feeling pain inside trying to fight a battle against the devil, I know it's a hard thing to do I know I've been there before! Jesus is the only way out. Keep writing you have been given a talent by an amazing God. Stay strong, God bless!
    Love Courtney


  • Jessa
    August 17, 2004
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    thanks so much for your kind comments - they're appreciated very much


  • Onfire4Jesus
    August 17, 2004
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    Wow!! Very well written. Very well put out as well. Thanks for sharing this poem. I enjoyed the way you put it as well. God Bless You!!!


  • pixelated nonsense
    August 17, 2004
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    Brilliant, as usual. I'd tell you more, but I'm in too much pain. Love ya.
    Cecilia. xxx


  • Jessa
    August 17, 2004
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    thank you very much cheerio (i tend to shorten peoples names, sorry LOL) i appreciate it


  • iswearimnotnaked
    August 17, 2004
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    WOW! i'm speechless! that was amazing!


  • Jessa
    August 17, 2004
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    it's not guilt i feel, just sadness. thank you for your comments

  • fugee
    August 17, 2004
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    very nicely written. I can see you feel alot of guilt. The rhyming was good


  • Jessa
    August 17, 2004
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    ummm what?


  • Chad Lough
    August 17, 2004
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    UMMM...

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