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Sweet Natalia

I met this really wonderful poet,
while writing poems and having fun,
her sense of humor makes her laugh,
now the gigglin group has begun.

Her user name is Poetic Escape,
she's aunty to Rowena, alias Wizzy Jo,
though she calls Wizzy's a snot-head,
we all know how she loves her so.

Now she has a friend named Jasper,
he sits on her lap in the easy chair,
he likes hiding in the laundry basket,
chewing on her bikini underwear.

She helps give love and care at work.
the men follow her all around,
she's a Kindred-Soul free spirit,
she likes being chauffeured downtown.

Her motto is really optimistic,
yesterday's gone and isn't coming back,
she's always well dressed, looks real good,
even when she rolls out of the sack.

She showed how to make smiley faces,
to a stupid old fart like me,
We can never thank Natalia enough,
for all her help at Allpoetry.


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TO NATALIA, A WONDERFUL FRIEND I HAVE ONLY KNOWN FOR A SHORT TIME BUT HOPE SHE IS A FRIEND FOR LIFE. AT MY AGE THAT MIGHT NOT BE TOO LONG, LOVE, SANDY
Written August 16th, 2004

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  • Sandygram silver member
    September 4, 2004
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    Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem. I appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it. Shr is such a so nice She always has time for others. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Sep 04, 10:31 because ''.

  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    September 4, 2004
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    Oh Sandy , this was a lovely write for a lovely petess and friend . I met her the same way you did , here on AP and she has often made me smile just by stopping by my page with a friendly howdy mate. Best of luck in this contest ,
    Reenie

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 18, 2004
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    Thank you for the comment, it was a pleasure to write about Natalia. I have only known her for a short while but I can talk to her like I've known her for years. Anais Elaine is the same way. You are all a wonderful group of people on allpoetry. Take care, Sandy
  • -Dawn-
    August 17, 2004
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    Aww yes indeed you did write Natalia perfectly here.

    I also like how you included her neice in this as well as her AP motto~~ those were very nice touches. This is just the type of poem I wanted to read for this contest. Funny and sweet at the same time.

    Do you believe Natalia didn't think I would get any entries for this? Thank you for helping me show her how wrong she is


    Great work on this~~ thank you so much for entering


    ~~Dawn


    Edited on Aug 17, 9:35 p.m. because ''.

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 17, 2004
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    Thanks so much for the comment. I hope you enjoy your holiday. Look forward to your story when you get back. Take care, Sandyr
    Edited on Aug 17, 1:07 p.m. because ''.
  • pozo
    August 17, 2004
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    A wonderful tribute to someone who must mean a lot to you, thanks for commenting on my poem and also getting your granddaughter into my story (I'll post more next week, maybe this week but I'm on holiday- staying with someone I know ) Keep writing

  • Anais Elaine
    August 17, 2004
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    Fantastic write !!

    Hi Sandy
    You have got Natalia off to a T, lol I really liked this poem about my BESTEST friend on the worl wide web
    Great flow, and made me smile
    Take care because I care
    Elaine

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 17, 2004
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    Let Laughter Rule The World

    I'm glad you like the poem. It was fun to write. I got a couple of the ideas from Rowena's cute poem. She is amazing for her age.Your friend is so nice to have a contest for you. Well I guess I'll write a poem and then finish writing my comments. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Aug 17, 8:14 because ''.

  • Wizzy Jo
    August 17, 2004
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    This made me smile You mentioned me in the poem too! lol I love this poem and I know Natalia does too I think this describes her perfectly Great poem good luck in the contest
    Rowena Jo

  • Talia
    August 17, 2004
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    ROFL

    Sandy you never fail to amuse me and this is just what I need after a shift like mine. Absolutley fantastic Thank you very much and good luck

  • live4eternity
    August 16, 2004
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    This is pretty cool! You brung out your friendship with humor. Your are always good with humor, very good. Yet you bring out a serios side of this also, well done!
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