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My Dear Friend Jason (live4eternity)

Thank you dear Lord for sending a friend,
a very dear friend is so hard to find,
he is a gentle, unselfish and humble young man,
God when you made him you made one of a kind,

When he spoke of God , he had such a gentle voice,
he speaks of his great love for his wife,
his love for their daughter he wrote in a poem,  
this dear friend has really changed my life.

With my friend's help my life was happy again,  
searching for our Lord took so many long years,
my dear friend was there as I cried for days,
he helped turn my fears into happy tears.

He will always have a special place in my life,
the good Lord has blessed me with a dear friend,
our love for God has bonded our friendship forever,
we'll be friends till our time on this Earth ends.    

I wish I knew how to show my dear friend,
saying thank you does not seem enough to me,
so I wrote this poem for the poets to see,
how wonderful he is, his name is live4eternity.  

   THANK YOU MY DEAR FRIEND
      GOD BLESS YOU

Author notes

This is dedicated to a wonderful young man and poet here on allpoetry who has helped change my life. Thank you live4ternity

Written August 16th, 2004

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  • Sandygram silver member
    January 31, 2005
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    Thank you so much becca for the warm and lovely comment. I am so proud of this young man who helped change me life. Take care, Sandy

  • kjack
    January 31, 2005
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    You are truly one of a kind. This is incredible. I am at a loss for words. Sorry it has taken me so long to get around to judging the contest, but I have had the flu and haven't been able to get online much. I am trying to catch up with everything now. The results will be posted tomorrow. Thanks for your patience with the contest, and thanks so much for entering your talent. Good luck to you.

    becca

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 18, 2004
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    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I enjoyed writing it. Take care and have a day.
  • Praise his name
    August 17, 2004
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    Aww this is so sweet and I hope that you have shared this with your friend. wonderful write.
    God bless and good luck
    mary

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 17, 2004
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    If your a friend of Jason you must be a great guy too. Someone will come along when you least expect it. Take care Sandy
    Edited on Aug 18, 5:30 because ''.

  • Jcsketch82 gold member
    August 17, 2004
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    Oh I love live4eternity, this is a great write I love it, very great job, And yes love is the worlds greatest gift, I hope to find it soon, but very great write.
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