days’end
lonely, I wait for end of day to come
as shadows cast by the setting sun
remind me of love lost and found
as sweet songs of birds subside
hopes for just one more day
fill my thoughts this eve
once more let me
have a chance
for hope,
love
dee garner
august 15, 2004
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Written August 16th, 2004
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ah such a sad penning here, a sigh at the end of a long day. hope is always on the horizon
spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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Great!
hot poem!! I really loved it...it was so cute and i loved how u set it up!! It was like it was getting smaller and smaller like it was getting closer to the end. I'm not sure if that's what u wanted but that's the impression I got! Your poem brings a sense of peace to me when I read it!! Great Job!! -
beautiful~
I love the days end somehow or another
Its peaceful and tranquil and hoping somehow we wake up to another glorious day
I am like Rennie this left me very soothed
Love the tranquility in it and love the background
Love you too
Susan~~~
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Days end is so profound. As I grow older, I look forward to the end of the day so that I may rest but I always hope for the morning to come so that I may rise up and do it again. This poem is so soothing, and leaves me with a peaceful sigh! Thank YOU!
Much Love,
Renee
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sad, very sad. I'm so glad I have family around me. I don't think anyone should be alone but life has a way of twisting things the way it wants...
A beautiful piece. Dee
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Pat -
at the beginning yr words made me sad, but you left me with a big smile... thanks.
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THis is beautifully written. Loving and sincere imagery.
Sam
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Hope, is the only bee that makes honey without flowers....great write...thanx for the smile...thanx for sharing..Peace Abel
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Wow this poem is very captivating at least to me. I totally felt the emotion in the poem. I love your backgraound and the layout of your poem. Awesome work. I'm looking foward to your new works. Good luck
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Beautiful, Dee! Anytime I need to feel uplifted, I know where to come. Always a chance, always! Love ya!--Kel
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excellent hopeful enjoyable poem
Dee- Awesome write with very descriptive feeling and terrific style and presentation.Your background only strengthens the message in your poem. This piece of poetic beauty makes me feel like God reached down from Heaven and touched my shoulder. This happens to me from time to time. I've found that this only does, when there's a personal message within what I am reading. I see, since last visit here, you've expanded your author's info. and pages. I was think about Vicki before I came to check your site and see what was up with you? Busy, I see! i've not been around since my spring trip. Know I'll never catch-up around here. I was really surprised by the growth of authors since last spring. Thanks for popping into my pages. I hope to be spending alot more time with my writing again. Running out of physical energy for the outside stuff. Wierd summer weather has made some projects that were planned totally impossible to start. Oh well! Always next year. New PC system so much learning to do! I need to find assistance with some of my new prgms. and features to be able to really apply them as I desire. See your taking a class here at site. Looks interesting! I'll be back to read the assignments. Catch u Later, God Bless You, keda -
I read this a few days ago - don't know why I didn't comment on it. Sad, but as the category says, full of hope. Presented beautifully also.
Best wishes always, Del. -
excellent!
Very beautifully written!
With the visuals, and expression woven in this, you have created a wonderful piece that speaks to the mind and heart.
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Aww Dee, this is a great and lovely write! I'm glad to see your poems still coming!
Love always,
Maru -
Great Write
What a great write Dee and the style is totally awesome. I get a sense of peacefulness from this poem and the background only adds to it and gives the poem more strength. Avril
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Thank you, aura. I appreciate you taking time to read and comment. There's a name for this particular style, though it escapes me at the moment. I'm terrible about names of the different styles.
Dee
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Dee, may your hopes all be fullfilled-'once more let me have a chance for hope, love ' Your poem is very well written, I found it very hauntingly arresting, right from the first line itself-I have also liked your backdrop very much , it is most befitting .The form of the poem is very innovative and appealing.
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