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Everytime

Everytime I see your face
My heart starts to race

You play games
I play back the same

I want to tell you
But im afraid of rejection

I want you to love me
So i can love you

I cant wait to see you
Because i want to be with you.

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Written August 16th, 2004

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  • HammeR
    August 16, 2004
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    Hey girl I see you have added a new write to your collection. Pretty nifty notion of love that you write about. I really liked the line about you play games, and hope that you arent getting ready to set a pic on this fellow.......lol. Enjoyed reading through this, thanx for sharing and take care.