Im sick of writing all of these poems
Everything so dreary saying "i feel so alone"
All my buddies read it
They say i feel so bad
Why do i have to be so sad?
I need to move on
Let everything behind
a new beginning
lets try one more time
make this life better
make friendships last
make trust never fade
This life WILL be so much better
No more tears
No more LIES
as of NOW i have the PERFECT life
Author notes
Written August 15th, 2004
A contest entry
- Freedom, come to me! - - - (Depressive/Sad/Dark) by Ebbing.X.Discreetly.
700 points, ended December 28, 2008, 57 entries
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really good write, i wish that were true for me
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haha thanks lauren! ur a good writer too! a gr8 writer! LOL I LOVE U! see u in class! lol
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SHELLEY!!! You such asnd I hate you! No not really, you are sucj a good writer!! keep it up!
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awww thank you gorgeous! i love you too!!!
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AWESOME!
HOLY EFF SHELLEY! you did such a good effin job wow claps and you deserv a perfect life! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! -
Hey thank you so much! i appreciate it! ill be sure to look at ur poetry!
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-I get it, and it was good..A lot of emotion into it as well.. The last line was my favorite "as of now i have the perfect life. Some people whould just die for one day being perfect.. Well keep it up and best of wishes-
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are u even kidding me?
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what? I dont get it...
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