staring
at the letters
on the pages
in this book
they mean
nothing
to me
tyring
so hard
to read
but i
keep thinking
of you
missing
you
even though
i know
you were
just here
despite
the fact
your only
a phone call
away
i feel...
alone
Author notes
god damn summer reading to hell!!!! if this fucking book were just even a little bit interesting i might actually be able to concentrate..........ANA!!!!!!!! wanna just tell me what the book's about??? 
Written August 15th, 2004
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hey kid. its troy. i'm sorry that you've had a bad day. i hope it improves soon.. see. i told you i'm good at this poetry thing.. lol. anyway. i'll ttly. okay? have a good whatever untill i talk to you again. oh, and btw. this was an amazing poem. -
aww baby, you're not alone! You have to let me know when you're doing your homework, I'll come distract you in person! huggles and kisses! even though we all know that I'm not the one you rally want them from...
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I really like this. You are bein g added to my favourites for sure! Keep it up! *Jade* XXX
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Ohh, coolness in this poem. I love the short lines. Absoultely love them. And I can relate, because sometimes I sit there and try to read and my mind always wanders to certain people and I how I feel like I need them there with me. That happens sometimes when I try to write, and it sucks because I dont want to write about these people....Oh well. Lovely poem.
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This was nicely written. I've had that problem myself to busy thinking about my mate to the point where I can't concentrate
. She lives in another state so we hardly get to see eachother at all But I am going to visit her very soon. Nice write I look forward to reading more.
LadyRage
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I really love the structure of this write... very crisp and clean, well done
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being alone sucks ass huh brity. well, at least u read the damn book. i read the first chapter and just quit.
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hi brit i like rgis powem sry i havent been on latley mmm muah kisses i love you brit
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aw marie, i'm sorry....even if you were here though you took that class last year so you wouldn't have to take it again.....I MISS YOU SOOO MUCH!
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.... i would gladly read it for you and tell you what its about... but since i dont go to olentangy anymore, theres not much point, but great write
love ya
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i actually made it to p. 106.....it's a miracle.....now only 182 to go........SHOOT ME!!!!!!!
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HAHA! You're trying to read Founding Brother...well I have to read the shit too...And I'm not done yet.
-A
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