Look up , let your tears dry , take a breath ... and smile.
Let the pure rain bathe your wounds ,
let the golden sun heal them and bless them .
And let me teach you the language of love ,
let our hearts be one .
Author notes
Written August 14th, 2004
A contest entry
- Short And Sweet by unknownfrailty.
400 points, ended August 15, 2004, 37 entries
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Awww. Certainly something sweet, and something so pure. Short and sweet just like I asked for. Thanks so much for sharing this, and good luck in the contest. Know it's taking me a while to judge it but I'm exhausted. Thanks again. ^^
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This was short and to the point. I've expressed these very feelings to people who are hurting. This piece is warm and full of compassion.
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