Give me pain , punishment and even death ... You can keep me away from her , you can stop me from writing of her memory , speaking her name , drawing her face in the sand , ... but you cant stop me from dreaming of her , and thats good enough for me
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Written August 14th, 2004
A contest entry
- Short And Sweet by unknownfrailty.
400 points, ended August 15, 2004, 37 entries
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very nice, very cute, haha, heartwarming, its very different from your other poem which i read, but its still, altho i did like the style and the words of you other one better.
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Hehe. Wish I had read these before your Musing poem. Haha. This was another something that is great, and of course short and sweet. *Nod, nod.* It's something worth reading, and just says to me at least that you can't do anything to erase her, she's already implanted in my memory, and already a permenant member of my dreams. Thanks for entering with another poem. ^^
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