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Good Morning God

Good morning my sweet Lord,
I thought I'd say hello,
you've given me a sunny day,
you've made the sunshine glow.  

You must have heard my prayers,
as I laid in bed last night,
when I awoke this morning,
the sun was shining bright.

I know the sun is not shining,
in the blue sky just for me,
it's shining bright today,
for all the world to see.

Thank you my sweet Lord,
that's all I have to say,
now it's time to enjoy,
your bright and sunny day.



 

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Written August 14th, 2004

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  • MoonChild55
    August 14, 2004
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    Wonderful!!!

    From MoonChild55,
    Hi sandygram!!! I just read your poem Good Morning God. I love it. I could actually feel your pleasure in the beauty of the morning that God put before you. Also I want to tell you that I pray for B.J. and you every night. I hope he is safe and I will continue to keep you both in my prayers. Be strong in the Lord!

  • Sandygram silver member
    August 14, 2004
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    THANK YOU

    I'm glad you liked my poem Good Morning God. I was up early on my computer and said to myself, good morning God so I decided to write him a little poem. It felt wonderful writing. As you can read on my author's page I am a new Christian. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on the poem. Take care

  • RyanLong
    August 14, 2004
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    Love it

    I love this. It flows brilliantly, and its simple in a great way. I love to see something on this site. This poem is like a light breaking the dark.. beautifully done