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Short and Bittersweet

If you hate me,
then why do you care?
If you love me,
then why aren't you here?
If you don't feel either way,
then why bother?

Do you love to hate me,
or hate to love me?

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Written August 14th, 2004

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  • Lottie
    August 20, 2004
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    great write, interesting concept. maybe loving is about being able to hate someone and still forgive them? chin up! xxxxxx


  • August 20, 2004
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    cool

    I love the play on words!

  • natbaby15
    August 14, 2004
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    awe

    I like that... that's really cool. especially the last lines "Do you love to hate me, or hat to love me?" that's exactly how i feel about my ex. hes like im just bored now but now he tells me he never cared.... but before he did. then its no i didn't. then im like "why bother" i really love your poem.. good job. i look foward to your other writes....

    nat~