Ribbon,
embracing time
with memories between
delicate fingers that whisper,
“emblem.”
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Written August 13th, 2004
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3 stars ***
this is short but as my respected friend "el desdichado" said it is subtle... i liked the pattern and represntation of this write ( like usuall ) ... good work.. take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up niki.. your humble little friend..
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I like this to it seems like every time I try to write a short poem it just comes out longer then my normal ones lol so I envey you the abilty
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I like the structure of this piece a lot. It reads through very well. A smart, subtle poem.
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