I wish I didn't know you anymore
I don't want this pain
It's always raining when you're around
And you forget everything good I ever said
Stop with the word games
They make no sense to me
I wish the rain would wash away the memory of you
Cos I can't take this anymore
I can't forget those things
And I know you can't forget
I'm nothing but a little girl inside
That's why I needed you near
But I'm all grown up now
I can live on my own
I just need the rain to fall
And make all these words disappear
Author notes
Written on 12th August 2004 at 23:22 GMT
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A contest entry
- Gaining the Name by staindvaynez.
400 points, ended July 21, 2005, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a nce poem. Feelings really show and pain is felt. God Write.
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Not one of your best. Though, I am glad you won a trophy for your efforts. Good job. I can guess who it was for.
Your friend,
Kain -
i can't help but wonder who this was written about. If your geocities was up to date i'd find out from there. Anywho, its a cool poem, nicely written and it flowed well.
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thanks fro entering this great poem!
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I like where you started and ended with this poem... I think how you traveled between the two was a little rocky.
Greraet idea, and it has given me a little inspiration and a note jotted down for future use.
Keep it up!
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I can relate to this one-especially now, tonight, with the crazy stuff happening in my life currently. I like both of your entries
Again, thanks so much for entering, and good luck!
~blessings~
~rora
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