spiders lacy home
dewdrops studded glistens
invites beckons hope~
Author notes
Just for fun I can't win made a pact dag nab it 
Hope you like this one sis 
Your sis
Susan~~~~
Written August 12th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- traditional haiku-contes
t by . 300 points, ended August 13, 2004
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This poem was such a different one than most Haikus. You focused on one of the tiny pieces of nature that most busy people tend to overlook in their hurry to go go go. I really enjoyed the descriptive words, especially beckons. I've always liked that word really and truly. Such a simple Haiku but an excellent beauty to it.
Wonderful job!
~M~
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Wow that makes the little things almost bearable. that pic looks like strings of pearls..
Wonderful ku
Susan -
Excellant
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hi susan wow i absolutely love the picture and ur writing here!
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Your pictures are incrediable Susan on these, I read this als
Another excellent pictured haiku.....Sherry
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Spiders creep me out but they are amazing and fascinating creatures. I like watching them make webs on my door (i'm inside of course!) The other day there was this GIGANTIC spider outside, the size of my palm! It was carrying a huge egg sac too. I got my daughter and we hurried safely inside! thankyouverymuch! Their webs are beautiful, especially dew glistening in the morning. I enjoyed reading this
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Beautiful haiku and photo to go with it. I always loved the glistening spider webs that were sprinked with dew or rain. You did a great job with this haiku.
Cheryl
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lovely haiku, I love them but most my poems need more room then they let me have but I still love reading them
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Lovely picture and write wonderful done......Hugs,Sherry
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Dear Susan,
I think your haiku is a perfect complement to this beautiful picture. Well done. Please confirm your new email addresss because I am getting messages returned that I sent to your former address. I was not aware you had changed.
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Wow, this is beautiful. Wonderful job as always.
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i've tried my hand at hiakus but, just can't seem to get them quite right...
i guess i always have more to say than can be summed up in so few words, but, you always seem to find a way around my shortcommings with such good pieces to make me think i can try it sometime!
hehehee
blessings
mike -
Beautiful pic' and poem, Sis! I was just admiring a spider web with a big spider in its center last night on my walk. It was attached to a beautiful statue and surrounded by gorgeous landscaping with a water fountain. It was such a tranquil setting, I hated to leave. Hard to believe so much beauty could be found in a little plot of ground in front of half of a twin house. Next time I go for a walk, I'm going to take a picture of it..really nice (like your poem and pic').
Love Ya!
<3 Maureen
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A winner in my book even though you made a pact LOL Beautiful words and the picture is a wonderful added effect.
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Once again I like the image you painted. In a few words you create a vivid picture in my mind.
I don't know much about Haikus but the most recognized form that I know is 5-7-5. This looks like 5-6-5.
Also that last line doesn't flow as well as the other 2 (my opinion)
But as always, you write beautifully
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Amazing!
Wow! This is so awesome! Again I apologize for taking so long to yet again coem and read & comment on your write, you are such a talented writer & there is no way that I coudl ever forget you! I am continuously trying to return the favor & check out my favorite poets upon this site & you my dear are one of them
Your haiku here along with the amazing picture shows me that your poetic skills are even more beautiful each & everytime I read them. Excellent Job Hun, you're Amazing ---Sara
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excellent!
Wonderfully done!
This is a beautiful piece here. You made the web much more of a form of art than most look see.
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Very beautiful! Loved the image! I'm so out of inspiration that even haiku I can't write
Well done Susan!
kisses and love,
Mari
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Very good haiku Sis
The picture really sets it off. I know we can't win, but it's good to keep our minds sharp with these.
~Love~
~Sally~
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