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So Cliche (Opposites Attract)

Empty beer bottles spinning on the floor
A familiar scene; I've been here before
But someone new catches my eye
I know I'll never let this moment pass me by
So we run away from all of the chaos
But my words seem to be lost
Thinking just slips my mind
We lock the door and forget about time
You are you and I am me
That alone says that we'll never be
We're just so different, it'll never work out
But isn't that what love's about?

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Written August 11th, 2004

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  • XxInnocencexX
    August 12, 2004
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    *claps* I like it! Especially the second line, really helps to give it rhythm..good poem, well done. Becky xxx