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I think of you almost everyday
No words can say
What I need to say
I can’t tell you
How much I love you
How much I need you
You are my everything
The air I breath
The blood that runs through my viens
I live because you love me
Never would I give it up
You are my everything
The air I breath
The blood that runs through my viens
You are my EVERYTHING

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dedicated to sydney roseberry
Written August 11th, 2004

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  • Party Monster x 2
    August 11, 2004
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    awww....so sweeeet!!! i loved it too!! like how you capatalize (sorry if that ain't spelled right, i got problems) everything. i liked it! keep it up!