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The Butterfly

Butterfly,soaring so free
with no thoughts
of what will be
Would that i
Could have such wings
to carry me away......
Away to a place
Where i can bring
Just me myself
and my magic wings....
no cares, no worries, no fear
only me
soaring free
flying.......

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Written June 14th, 2002

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  • Candy6
    May 12, 2007

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    so beautiful

    great describing your write of butterfly. i love butterflies....ya wonna read my allpoetry popular poem "Butterfly"


  • -Ink Artist-
    March 15, 2007
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    Fabulous descriptive write of a butterfly! I have often wished for the wings of a butterfly. To float and dance on air as they do, to feel the freedom. Excellent work! You are a wonderful poetess to visit for our Poetic Bandit's Hood-winking! Gifted visions you share!


    ~Lori


  • brokenmoon
    August 29, 2004
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    heh, i wish i could fly..... flaps arms

  • poet0angel
    July 25, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    A lovely write. Butterflys are so beautiful and graceful.
    Your words painted beautiful imagery. Well done

    ~Erika~

  • IfOnlyLifeWereFair
    July 13, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Beautiful a hundred times over! I would love to soar away from this lil' town I'm in too~~~~
    Until We Meet Again,
    Jewels


  • soulwarrior silver member
    June 28, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    I like the message
    no cares,
    no worries,
    just carry me away.
    Boy I think I need that right. now.

  • ally ann
    June 25, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    i love it! especially since my nickname is butterfly ;)


  • Rubee
    June 20, 2002
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    excellent

    A beautiful poem!!...oh to have such wings to fly free even if for a moment..makes one want to dream about it...a lovely write Susan :))


  • rummery78
    June 20, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Reminds me of Mariah Carey's song Butterfly. How would be great to grow wings and get away from it all just for one day, without a care in the world


  • nell
    June 15, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    a wonderful piece you has here


  • Foretold-Events
    June 15, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Very sweet. : ) Such caring and uplifting words. : )


  • Unbridled1
    June 15, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Kind of spooky...posted of almost the exact same feeling just tonight! It would be so nice to be a butterfly...at least some days. Very beautifully done!

  • sweetbrother2
    June 14, 2002
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    excellent

    The sense of freedom in this exhilerating...I really enjoyed this.

  • Angelboi01
    June 14, 2002
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    excellent

    Wonderful. I think the is a really good poem. Keep up the good work.

    Angel

  • Wensday
    June 14, 2002
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    excellent

    Really good. Too bad there isn't really a place where we can go and have no worries :[ But I enjoyed your poem! Thanks!


  • FatelessWanderer
    June 14, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Great write thanks for commenting on my poems! :)
    tigger


  • June 14, 2002
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    excellent

    :) *smiles* solitude can bring such peaceful thoughts


  • April Renee
    June 14, 2002
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    neutral

    very nice
    enjoyed

    ~*~adriana~*~

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