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Moment By Moment



                     -  Time slips away-
                 Its never held, Its never caught.
                 Its never kept, It never ceases.
            It never gets ahead, It never falls behind.
                         It only vanishes,
                         Moment By Moment
                         -Time slips away-
                 Memories are made, Memories are lost
                 Memories are found,Memories are written.
                Memories to recall, Memories to cherish.
                        -Time slips away-
                         Moment By Moment

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Written August 11th, 2004

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  • Loonytzuky
    June 22, 2005
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    very realist i like youre writting 2 hope 2 see more


  • June 22, 2005
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    so very true, thats what I like about you, its all about the truth and opening up your eyes.


  • Whit-08
    August 11, 2004
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    good job

    wow,
    i like this poem, alot, it's nice, it shows alot, i like it alot! good job, and great write!
    keep up the good work! and we all welcome u here to AP!!!
    ~whitney~


  • I Could Care Less
    August 11, 2004
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    i like this ALOT.. good job on it.. keep it up.. adn welcome to AP...