air humid,
hot and heavy,
sky churning with
angry clouds,disturbance brewing......
ignoring it..not allowed!
wind gust and
lightening flashes,
squall lines
ominous and grey
given birth to
booming thunderstorms
no sunshine here today!
as currents move
air masses crash,
turbulunce is born
thunder rumbles,
lightining cracks...
Alas
It's a full fledged storm
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Written June 14th, 2002
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I watched many squall lines form the summer I went to OK with my Aunt Pearl. Never saw anything like it. Even witnessed a tornado. Now that's something I never want to experience again. Great job in the decriptions...I could smell the rain before it hit the ground.
Hugs,
Sally -
don't touch it!
nice, good length, not too long or too short. very intense description. -
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I am seeking shelter, quick! Or maybe I will wait and watch with wonder? :) -
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Excellent discription and it's so intense. Great write! -
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Good job.The poem flows as a melodius tune. All it needs are some notes and it can be sung. Couple of things (1) text color makes it difficult to read, (2) first line humud is misspelled. -
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really catches the mood and intensity...lovely piece ;) -
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I love thunderstorms...so vividly described in this piece..I enjoy reading your work and commend you for your vast variety of topics. I will definitely return to read more :)) -
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Gosh I love it...I can almost smell the lightening feel it along my skin and taste the rain..makes the mind see..great. -
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Very vivid picture of a brewing storm...I can already smell the rain. -
don't touch it!
Whoa! Well done description here! ~CWM -
neutral
great job
~*~adriana~*~ -
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Very nice! I like it a lot!! :) -
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Fantastic! You can almost feel the storm. Very powerful and definately on topic with the title.
PoetrySmiles -
don't touch it!
Very en*lightening* :) You can almost smell the rain storm. -
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I love them.. so alive..you can feel the electric in the air.. and then that lovely feeling afterwards..
Barbsxx
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