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I need a little whimsy,

I need a little whimsy,
just to cheer me up a bit;
so, I checked the board
just hoping, that a friend,
would boost me up.

But, no such luck me darlin,
just doom and gloom and pain;
A lot of love and comfort;
But nought, so I might gain.

A little cheer and humor, is all
that I do ask;
so, come on all, a whimsy;
It's just a little task.

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I love writing these whimsys  Hope you don't mind
Written August 11th, 2004

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  • macandrew
    June 5, 2007

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    A capricious read. A bit of this to balance out the bit of that, that is bothering.

    John


  • Skip
    April 6, 2007
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    holy crap!!!!! wow i think that i've felt this way eight hundred time over and over again


    • cutiepie gold member
      April 6, 2007
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      Lol...thank you for this comment as I had forgotten this little whimsey...I shall have to drag it out more often as it was one of my better efforts


  • honey bear
    March 4, 2006
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    fun

    o h yes i feel like this some days when i look on the board and there is only sad poems and i just want some little thing to make me smile,fun little write though.

  • Skydancer2100
    August 13, 2004
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    what a wonderful poem!!! I loved it!

  • pozo
    August 12, 2004
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    This is a happy and hopeful poem, searching for happiness. Keep up the good work and thanks for commenting on my poem


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 12, 2004
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    Thank you Damon, I am glad you enjoyed it


  • Deke
    August 11, 2004
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    This is an excellent poem that I really enjoyed. Be back again soon.
    Damon D. Brewer


  • wattle silver member
    August 11, 2004
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    Ha – I think I'm the exception here - Gee I dislike strangers talking to me on public transport when I'm getting all lean and mean (ready for work). Besides who really wants to know about their wife’s love affair or the kids spots, anyway. Give me a good thoughtful "Poor sad me" Poem to get my mind right - Ha – (stuffed in a train no brain no pain) --- thanks for the poem I 'like'.
    Edited on Aug 11, 7:10 p.m. because ''.


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 11, 2004
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    Aw and there was me thinking I had used enough wrinkle cream


  • Xx Alice xX
    August 11, 2004
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    People look for different things in other people, I look for smiling eyes. Their happiness inside shows through their eyes. They are producers of whimsy. uplifting write, thank you.


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 11, 2004
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    I am glad you enjoyed it Thank you


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 11, 2004
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    Thank you


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 11, 2004
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    Thank you....... that certainly cheered me up


  • rebeka
    August 11, 2004
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    cute...ok, sending you a bit of whimsy...

    deedle dee dee, a smile to you from grinning me, deedle de deedle dee dee.
    hugs, rebeka


  • Misty Melody gold member
    August 11, 2004
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    It must be in the air because I have been feeling the same. I hope your day has gotten brighter. But here is a smile & a hug to say have a better day, I hope that something special comes your way just to give that little boost. Melody

  • fredhib
    August 11, 2004
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    lovely, just delightful, smiles allround, your words just bubble up with fun like someone making bubbles -


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 11, 2004
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    No I wouldnt like it either but thank you for the kind words


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 11, 2004
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    Thank you


  • melphleg gold member
    August 11, 2004
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    Must be something in the air. I'm in a similar mood. Glad whiskey is a metaphor and that what you really need is a boost from a friend. Nice write. Enjoyed it because I could relate (except I don't care for whiskey )


  • TheWeakPersonified
    August 11, 2004
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    aww..this is cute, dont mind at all, its nice a great altentive to sa depressing poems definatly nice work!


  • cutiepie gold member
    August 11, 2004
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    Thank you for your support. You are a gem


  • nOva-
    August 11, 2004
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    wonderful!well done ,cutiepie! true spirited and heart-filled poem!BRAVO!!!GodBlessYa ...keep writing

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