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Rose

Behind your eyes
Emeralds melt
I’ll hand you a rose
These pricks I felt
You’ll take the rose
Be careful darling
Watch out for the pricks
Don’t worry
The pedals always fall apart
But I promise
I won’t break your heart
Come with me
I’ll catch you a star
Hold you tight
Its so far
So so far
You’ll put the rose in a vase
Watch as its pedals fall
I’ll give you another just incase
How bout a kiss instead?
On your rose colored lips
I’ll watch out for the pricks
And we can fly away
On our star
Your so far
So so far
But we will be
Forever
There
Flying away
Without a care
becuase I’ve fallen in love
with the rose
I forgot to watch out for the pricks
Now brock a heart
As time ticks
Healed with your hand
Now we fly away again
Your so bueatiful
And im so weak
Fallen fallen
For you
And everything you do
Fly away with me
Fly away with me

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for rose
Written August 11th, 2004

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  • Party Monster x 2
    August 11, 2004
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    awww...so sweet!! i loved this!! i like how you use the thorns of a rose as hurting and i liked the whole flying away together thing too!! keep it up!!
    ~tamera~ ur new bi friend. haha.


  • Whit-08
    August 11, 2004
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    good job

    awwww, this is so sweet! so cute! i love it, that is very good! great talent great write also!
    keep up the good work!
    ~whitney~