All around me shadows gather,
My dread grow's as the Dark One's touch fall against my naked soul
It severs me and my blood drips,
To the cold uncaring tombstones;
In agony I flee
While oblivion follows,
Now alone my essence falls,
Upon my cold eyes,
Death!
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Written June 14th, 2002
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Eyes wide open
Dark stuff . Like some nightmares I have. Poe would be proud & we have the same Birthday.. March 25th.. Happy birthday -
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oooh this was chilling! the imagery was really good -
Damn Susan
~ I am starting with the earlier writes~ This one brought shivers to the spine~ Awesome piece~ Keep these coming~ Look forward to more~ Needed a good hair raising 
~Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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excellent
hadd me nervous. nicely done! -
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Great intro to a spooky, devilish story, so was my first thought. Great feeling-provoker! -
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Thanks for the feedback, did you wake up in a graveyard when you wrote this, or nightmare. I thinking more of a happy, peaceful, heavenly light type death -
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Chilling and suspensful... -
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Very interesting. Must ask on how the ideas came of this write. Maybe from dreams of just thoughts that just come to you. : ) I tend to write alot in this manner or all I ever write not sure why still. : )
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