mythical creature
magical mysterious
pure sweet unicorn
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Written August 11th, 2004
A contest entry
- traditional haiku-contes
t by . 300 points, ended August 13, 2004
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thats kewl, a haiku about unicorns...its definately the most original and awesome haiku ever to come out of mythical creatures. It reminds of a song called "Beautiful Mysterious" now whenever I hear it I'm gonna think of unicorns...lol fun fun kudos to you and the unicorn
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Comment 'Comment 'I really want to say, ummmmmmm.... I really don't know what to say. I guess it's a good thing i know where you live? And i can tell you don't like people. It is understandable thogh becausee a lot of people don't like people. I hope that you find the thing in life your looking for if poetry or anything else happens to be what it is then good luck to ya. And never forget you will never have the whole world againt you there will always be one persn who doesnt have anything against you even if it is someone you theres someone who doesnt like it never met. Live life to the fullest and have a great one. Never let anyone get in the way of being who u are and who u want to be always be you even if' added successfully This is great...I love it. Thanks for sharing it This is great...I love it. Thanks for sharing it like it very much. i can put my self in this situati it's a hard load good job exressing your view piont.thanks foe posting this..it very
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very cool. too bad haikus have to be so short! ^_^
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ooooo this is so fairy-like, mystical, beautiful and cheery. when i read this beautiful description all i could picture was rainbows, waterfalls and unicorns lol. this is so nice and the background really adds to the mystical feel. good job on this and your description was amazing!
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this was great! i love unicorns and something as sweet and simple as that just made me smile.
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This is a lovely Haiku! An excellent escape from reality, and somewhat soothing. You painted great imagery here, so well done! It made me smile Take care, I hope to read some more of your work soon. Kate
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well, its short, sweet, and to the point... i like it.
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Pretty!
Jessa, I'm so glad you entered! I LOVE unicorns, pegasi, and horses, in general! This is very pretty and sweet, an alliterative description of this magical beast!
Good luck in the contest!
Regards,
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I like this. It's cute, gives a nice picture.
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my god jess. how on earth can you come up with these. i suck at metered poetry. you're just amazing. wonderful job. clap clap clap.
your friend, love always and forever,
Cecilia.
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