Crash crumple
car accident
clean underwear~
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Bad day, so I had to improvise 
Written August 10th, 2004
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lmao, i so like this one
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Hmmm, not so sure I like the car accident, not funny, been there, done that.
But I see your point. lol Always wear CLEAN undies, you never know when you might be in an accident! 
But this guy sure doesn't have to worry about clean undies, he doesn't have ANY undies on!! ROF He barely has dental floss on!!! hahahahahahahahaha 
Sis, you little perv, get your mind out of the gutter! lol 
Love ya. 
~Sheryl~
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Egads! How did I miss this one and nice pic too! Zowie! and Zoiks!
This was a fun Ku!
Susan -
A terrific homorous piece. The first two lines are showing you this horrible car accident, you are expecting a tragic senryu and then you are reminded once the again about the importance of clean underwear (I have to say, the title somewhat gives the ending away
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Lovely piece.
~Anastasia -
where did you get that picture of me from
i was told they were all destroyed, i paid 50 whole pence to get that taken from the market. i have been ripped off. hehehe what if you are not wearing any
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I can see the nurses and doctors now as they strip you off. Red faces grins of delight and all, one to make all those who wear sexy underwear truly think
Edited on Aug 17, 8:45 p.m. because ''. -
LMAO Really nice made me laugh jus when things get bad
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haha.... well you just put me on the floor.... "clean underwear" is the most important thing on the planet. Come on... every one here has to admit that....lol. Oh geeeeez.... can you imagine otherwise? Always wash your armpits too.... lol
Don -
Dear Susan,
I think I would have been tempted to go for all-out alliteration in this:
crash crumple
car collision
crushed codpiece
but I applaud your version. Good luck in the conte3st.Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.
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lol, this was pretty funny, It made me laugh, and that is always good, great job!
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Well hellooooooooo cutie pie! MMMMMMMM MMMMMM good. Oh and the senryu wasn't bad either. LOL Very good senryu sis. You keep up the good work
~Loads of love
from CA ~
~Sally~ -
Thanks all of you so much
Yes it made me see and I see it has you all too
Glad I could bring some sort of happiness to you all
I really appreciate the comments
Love all of you all
Susan~~~
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LOL... oh, and the pic adds to this :-)
Cute and entertaining poem.
Enjoyed,
~ Wendy -
Oh baby... what a picture! I had to click on this one. I can hear my Mother whining now..."Always wear clean underwear. Don't wear underwear with holes! You never know when you will have an accident! "
I loved this one!
Hugs sis!
Mary ann -
Coincidentally, I was looking at pics I have of men for each day of the week. I was chicken to post any. Glad to see you weren't.
Enjoyed this, Sis! Never saw a man who wore suspenders with his underwear before! 
Thanks for the smile!
<3 Maureen
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I don't know where I got the idea that this was a contest poem, Susan...But if it was I bet you'd win. I mean ..what judge in HER right mind could resist this one ????...lol
Don't mind me.. I'm a little wierd lately... maybe I need new glasses.
Dee
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LOL Susan! the pic is hilarious and the poem very funny! Keep clean underwear always, we never know when we are going to show it up
Kisses and love,
Mari
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Danna Teardrop and John
Glad you all dropped by and I could add a smile to your night
Hoping to catch up with you all soon
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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very good
Now that is quite a set of suspenders. I wonder if he dresses on the left or right.
Well written, a good bit of humour.
John -
LOL!! I love this! Thanks for the smile.
TD -
Haha! Love your sense of humor, Susan. (and your sense of imagery, yum yum)
My mom was in a crash crumpled car accident today. She is okay, but she is really banged up, and bruised, and her car is history.
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Liz,Dee and Pamela
Thanks so much for the comment
I almost thought the pic was a lil racy but then
Wow Imagination in overdrive
I got to thinking
I wonder if those underwear are edible
ROFLMAO
Thanks for stopping by and commenting
It means a lot
Love ya all
Susan~~~
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OMG even! LOL
well..you got the point across nicely
who's the blonde dudester? ..wait! i'm married...so it doesn't matter...and anyway..i like dark hair
too cute! i don't think i ever asked my kids if they had on clean underwear..hmmmmm..i wonder why not? isn't that what all parents do? hehe
love ya much
~Pamela -
Lol..way to go, Susan Is this the guy you've been hiding under the bed all this time???huh..huh...
The poem is cute and a good entry for the contest. I wish you luck
love and
Dee
Edited on Aug 10, 11:45 p.m. because ''.
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