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this is the perfect day

Kill me,
Stuff me,
In your best bag,
In your best trunk,
Of your best car,
Drive me to the highway,
Dump me on the roadside,
I’m high, I’m high,
Drive me to the end,
This is the perfect day.

Prepare for darkness,
I’m still the one you love,
But I have to dodge your bullets,
Jump your hoops, brave your winds,
Solve your riddles, play the middle,
Of all your chaos.

Kill me, stuff me, away,  
Drive me to the highway,
Dump me on the roadside,
Drive me to the end,
This is the perfect day.

A drunk ride followed by a short hangover,
And the next day becomes the same as before,
The globe is aglitter, my heart is aflutter,
Butterflies are dead, pinned on your wall,
But sooner or later,
The butterflies will be gone, slipping through your walls,
Hearing through your ego every time you claim the world halts,  
Finding the dull boredom in your sharp insults,
Escaping you,
Finally.

Prepare for darkness,
I’m still the one you love,
But I have to dodge your bullets,
Jump your hoops, brave your winds,
Solve your riddles, play the middle,
Of all your chaos.

Kill me, stuff me, away,  
Drive me to the highway,
Dump me on the roadside,
Drive me to the end,
This is the perfect day.

My heart will never decide,
My heart will never hide,
You can take my blood,
You can drag me through the mud,
I love the rain, it washes away the pain,
Somehow.

Kill me, stuff me, away,  
Drive me to the highway,
Dump me on the roadside,
Drive me to the end,
This is the perfect day.

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Written August 10th, 2004

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  • Instant Karma
    August 10, 2004
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    oh i really loved this, it's amazing how you filled with love and hate, thats something that's hard to do. Great job. it kind of reminded me of an audio slave song.


  • August 10, 2004
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    super job

    excellent stuff. i really like how you kept a theme throughout the enire poem. very dark, depressing...just what im in the mood for right now...and quite a bit of the time too. contuinue writing this kind of stuff, its really awesome.