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Your Love

I can see that special light in your eyes
                                 For you would hold the world for me
It wouldn't matter if it was impossible
                                         You'd try your best
and if that wasn't good enough
                                              just for the spite of it
you'd try once more
                                     but that's love for ya
especially for a woman
                                       your man is what counts
for your love is eternal
                                  No.....
you'll never let go.


               April 4, 1982

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Written August 10th, 2004

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  • SoPunkItHurts
    November 8, 2005
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    This highlights every womans feelings. She wants her man to be strong and hold her but not smother her. And Every woman loves her man more than anything in the world. (well most)

    Good work anyway. I like it


  • angelica silver member
    August 11, 2004
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    wonderful words Bill I always enjoy reading your poems you bring out my friend, so beautiful they are, and hey, I got your name right this time~Lovesya~Joan~


  • Thoughtful Seeker
    August 10, 2004
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    excells beyond words

    this is a really great poem,i loved it side,you are one of my fav writers on here i saw nothing wrong with this,it was perfect in ever way!!! keep up the fine work!!! you shine like the poetry star you truly are nbf