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.:it was a fairytale for a week:.

i miss our nights.
our silly fights.
i want to be the only hand you hold on to.
i want to be the only face you see in your dreams.
i miss dancing all night with you.
i miss our drinking and partying til 4am.
i miss sitting around for hours and saying nothing.
i miss the way you made fun of my accent.
i miss you.
i want to hear your voice again.
i want to feel your heart again.
i want to see your face.
i want to hold your hand again.
and lay beside you all day in the sun
in paradise for a week.
nothing but the sound of music and waves.
i cant wait to see you again.
im counting down the days.
i fell for you.
it was a fairytale for a week
in paradise.

Author notes

okay so. yall are probably wondering what the hell? lol
well i recently went on a cruise and i juust got back. i met someone special there..go figure. this is to him.
it was a fairytale for a week in paradise. exactly what it says...its so true. its amazing how seeing someone 24/7 can change your heart, feelings, and life.
i poured my heart out.
Written August 10th, 2004

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  • starryeyes17
    September 7, 2004
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    damn college keeps me so fucking busy now lol
    ill write more
    i love you!
    and ive misssssssed you loads

  • TBRduddette001
    August 31, 2004
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    I am so incredibly happy for you! You have no idea. Wow! What a fairy tale...awwwww...it's so cute! I'm jealous of your happiness but i am also genuinely happy for you! Isn't it amazing how much some people can touch you in so short a time? And isn't it wonderful when they do? . Especially if they inspire you into writing again . Keep pouring out your heart hun...you write so well and so honestly and I just plain dam missed you!!!!

    ~Trish


  • starryeyes17
    August 12, 2004
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    hehe I LOVE YOU AND MISS YOU!!!


  • -Pixie-
    August 11, 2004
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    awwwww, how sweet! thats great, what a lovely poem hun, twas touching. keep it up girl! miss ya

  • RoughRider
    August 11, 2004
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    Excellent

    OH honey I hope he is the one for you, you sound so much in love! Can't wait to hear all about it!
    MISS YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!

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