Bounty
chance caress
deep desire seeds
sweet terrain
skin to skin and then
deep breaths hot yet petal pure
growing love arise
ripe receive
harvest wholehearted
first-fruits fine
inside together
sown and growing ecstasy
bursting full in bloom
Blossom trust
uprooted never
passion pure
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Written August 9th, 2004
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Lovely , Lovely
Lovely honey and very passionate. Never am I good in Haiku
You certainly do great in any form you try
Loved the way you have grouped them to give a full beautifully sensual poem of love
Love from India - Joel - -
I liked those! You have some traditional and cntemporaries haiku in this set. Very nice images you show with all of them Theresa!
Nice to see you back with your pen in the hand!
Kisses and love,
Mari
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Awesome
Not bad at an attempt. I was touched (thats an acomplishment) good job -
bleh whenever I write hauikus they sound really pompus and stupid...no clue why...so double kudos to anybody who can write good haikus, like you...very good series of them, and I really liked all of them, great flow, and everything
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terrific
WOW! this was very well written and had an excellent flow to it. I especially loved the last haiku, Blossom trust uprooted never passion pure, it some how closed the piece very well. I think this was a great haiku piece and I look forward to reading some more of your work. You are an excellent writer and by the looks of it will have a bright future. Best of luck, -Jen-
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