what am I
~to you~
who am I
~in your life~
clouds flowing by in the sky
pictures scattered like leaves from a tree
love flows around like the wind
blood flows thru my veins like the kiss on your lips.
canvas of vibrant colors, yellows, whites and blues
life force stronger than my fragile state
hearts become one in the twilight of night
the skies open above to bring me to life.
connect thru the heart and soul of the one
capture what life you have left in this world
casual concept of colors we can not see
only of the one true love of you and me.
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Written August 9th, 2004
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This was beautifully written... I love reading your writes. Even though you try to put out the horror side of you you also have an angel side to you as well. Keep up the great writes. I clicked on the opened minded pt 3, but I figured I would read pt 1 & 2 it would make more sence... Anyways. I just love it! From ASmileIs4Ever2
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Impressive vision - I wonder, did you put the picture to the poem, or write the poem for the picture? The uncertain begining contrasts nicely with the forcefull, strength of the rest of the poem... and yet is somehow odd in the same poem as "only of the one true love of you and me"
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Very beautiful! An exquisit piece.
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Blushing, thank you hun. I am glad you enjoy my work. This one was amazing. I didn't even really think it, it just typed it self kinda. I opened my mind and these lines came out. Each one it's own piece.
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I love your reading your poems. This was so awesome! And I just love the pics... You are one of my best poets on this site. Very, Very, amaizing
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That was really cool. I liked it alot. It was almost like the first stanza was explaining the second and third.
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