Your skin smells of lavender each morning
You are so soft and gentle
You erase my mind of all thoughts
When I look at you
I find happiness within my soul
I have no tears inside
I only have your love
In my heart forever
I love you
Author notes
I love you, Christine.
Written August 9th, 2004
A contest entry
- be my muse by surreptitious.
300 points, ended August 11, 2004, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh soooooo romantic.. Christine seems like a very pleasant lady to be smelling every morning. Lucky you!
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Christine is a lucky woman! This is such a beautiful poem! Very well written!
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Beautiful love poem to your loved one..very tender and romantic..good job
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The lace and texture of a loving heart expose
Beautifully done pure truth becomes poetic mastery... this flowed from the heart and gave it the light... Blessings to you both! -
Very, very sweet. I agree with BraveHeart-- poems written for loved ones are very special and beautiful. I hope someone will someday write such a nice poem for me! Keep up the good work.
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This is very beautiful.
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A beautiful poem which I liked a lot- so beautifully written
This was short and simple, but also complex because of the complexities of all love. A wonderful write- keep up the good work
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Thank you very much, InFlight, for your encouragement.
Peter -
"I only have your love"
All you'll ever need.
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Thank you for your nice comment, Braveheart.
Peter -
This was so beautiful
I think all poems that are written for a loved one are beautiful! This was great!! I loved it!! You love this person and you put you heart into this. (I hope I'm at least close to right lol) wonderful. I hope you have a lovely day.
~Peace~
Braveheart
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