At first I used to hear him at night
I was so scared; it was such a fright
But as I went along the way,
I noticed I heard him day after day
I noticed he came when times were rough
At times when I felt I had enough
When I was weak he encouraged me,
He told me not to lose sight of all I could be
He said he had faith in me, he knew what I was capable of
When I needed help, to turn to the man above
At first I was scared, I did'nt’t know what to do
But the voice was so sweet, it sounded so beautiful
I felt so lucky, I felt so blessed
I thought I had it better than all the rest
I had angel, someone I was special to
An inspiration to do all I needed to do
It was so hard growing up without my dad,
I felt like my angel was all I had
One day I asked this angel of mines,
How come you only come around during bad times?
The answer he gave me, I still can’t believe,
This is what he said to me:
My beautiful daughter, I am always here
When you wake in the morning, when you’re combing your hair
Everyday I walk you to school,
I always make sure nothing happens to you
I watched you learn how to read and write
I picked you up when you fell off your first bike
When you had your birthday parties,
I helped you blow out the candles; yes that was me!
I always turn out your night-light
I tuck you in and kiss you good night
Whenever I look down you,
I always whisper, “I love you!”
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Written August 9th, 2004
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Aww, this is sweet. I'm actually at a loss for words here. Good job. Keep it up.
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Thank you so much Troi. Writing poetry is so new to me. Thi sis not complete. I may finish it on another poem or just edit. Come back soon. Thanks for your support.
Dee -
Diamond, have the background! lol I'm glad you like it, I'm really giving this poetry thing a shot. Thanks for the support!
Dee -
Beautiful
The poem is really great SporadicWrite, if more of us would listen to that whisper of a voice, our lives would be a whole lot better. The background is beautiful. I love the angel blowing the horn. You don't mind if I snag it do you, great thanks. I knew you would say yes. hehe. Keep on writing. I love all your work so far.
Avril
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Wow...you have done an amazing job with this piece! It flows so nicely and express such a nice sentiment! You obviously have a lot of talent! Keep goin'!
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