walking in this darkness
that has become my life,
all I seem to feel is loneliness,
wanting to end it all with a knife.
constant fighting every day.
my mom slapping me across the face,
I just feel like running away,
leaving this world without a trace.
no one would truly miss me,
no one would truly care,
I may just leave shortly,
no one will wonder if I'm even there.
more tears falling from my eyes,
wondering just what did i do,
no one seems to hear my silent cries,
the love I've been given..has never been true.
from the sky raindrops begin to fall,
I walk through the streets,
wondering if I've ever been loved at all...
Author notes
i feel like shit lately... i truely....dont know if i've ever been loved...or ever will be...
Written August 8th, 2004
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Har, if all yer poems are as good as this, you must be loved!
Tis certainly sad, but that doesn't make it any better or worse, methinks. And anyway, it seems yeh have a nice group of people to watch after yeh, looking at yer comments and all...so how about a happier piece next time? :-P -
this is so sad and heartbreaking to read because I felt like this for many years, the pain is very real and it leaves a mark on your life forever.
thankz for sharing
happy scribbling.
I care and I would miss your poetry if you just walked away
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The Sun is bright and brings us warmth, you make us all happy inside. This comment is also to applaud your poem, hehe I forgot to check the box in my other comment. Chin up Sun
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Sun
I agree with lonely, remember our chats! dance, dance, dance!
You should never feel as if you've never been loved, because here we all love you!! Things go up and down in life, trust me hehe. I think your writing is great, you show true feeling. and I think I can say for me and all your ap friends that we all love you and we hope you'll feel better soon!
Love and Friendship
LoneStar -
oh wow i liked this one.Very mournful...i will look forward to reading more.I have to go now as i am running a fever. take care
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excellent
Very sad poem Sun...... We often feel this way.... its okay you neednt be descouraged! smile and who says you arent loved? many people love you.... I remmeber you when we sued to chat in CB 
Keep up the spirits... and just as wonderful write here!
Lonely~ 
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awww i love you Dont worry you'll be okay. Just got to live through the hard times in life. Awsome write. Keep on writing cause you're really good. Untill later my friend.
Jason
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this is really sad.. been through some rough times myself.. but try to face life the other way round. dont wait for someone to love you. Accept you for who you are, love yourself first without giving a .... about what others think. Then u will see that there is someone who cares. Mayb right now you are too concerned to see what and why then to live life as it comes... message sent with a big sunny smile
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Wow! This is sad. I can't say that I don't know these feelings because I think everyone has at one time or another. Great display of emotion. Keep penning. Hope you feel better.
TD -
im really sorry that you feel this way. and i cant telly ou if you;ve been loved or if you havent, its just something some of us go through. i went through a feeling of where i thought nobody lvoed me that i had not one friend and i cried i cried so much i couldnt cry nymore. anywas i hope you'll be okay. good write, it lets out how you feel and your emotions. nice job.
-amanda-
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