Softly, sings the voice,
in the halls of the unknown.
Tempting sounds, linger.
Raising spirits, forever upwards;
Towards jubilation and exultation.
Angels, gaze onwards, deftly defying
all thoughts of despair.
Majestic arias, in profound array,
seeks to enthral and comfort all;
Spiraling, amidst the very chambers
of our hearts;
Soothing, emotions into divine
peace and tranquillity.
Author notes
I was listening to a piece of music
Written August 8th, 2004
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Love the wording here,
very nice,
shine on sweet soul.
Peace, and thanks for sharing you!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~ -
Heaven
Perhaps as we hope it should be. a truly heavy write. Deep thoughts on this fine poem..
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Many thanks
Glad you enjoyed it 
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This was a beautiful peice! Don't ever stop writing!
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Thank you I am delighted that you enjoyed it
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Good work. I really enjoyed it
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Thank you Damon, I am glad you enjoyed it,
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Very good write--I enjoyed this a lot, and I will be back again soon.
Damon D. Brewer -
I am glad you enjoyed it that much
thank you for your kind words
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Wow, that was deep. Very uplifting,rich with spirituality. I had to read it twice it was that nice. well done.
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I have one of the Anonymous Four's cd's. They sing in the style fo the 1200-1400's and research their pieces themselves. This write reminded me of their singing.
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The music I was listening to was "Madam Butterfly" as I love Opera, but yes it could relate to any choral Music, the nun's here sing unacompanied when they do sing, it can be beautiful, especially xmas carols Thank you for your kind words
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Thank you
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excellent!
This makes me think of the women singers of the 12-1400's. In that time they were not allowed to have instraments accompany them when they sung. I know towards the middle of the 1400's this started to change with the development of the Virginal and Harpsicord, but still.
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Awesome!
This is great!
Keith -
I am glad you enjoyed it
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excellent write if I do say so myself, painted such great pictures in my mind.
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awww I really liked this...it really put a certain image into my mind! great job on this! keep writing!! xoxo jXh xoxo
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Did you not like? or were you humming
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hmmmmmmm
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well nothing bad.. i read it over and over and it feels like a comforting poem.. yet from the beginning... through halls of the unknown...kinda threw it off a little.. then it shows expressions of defying all thoughts of despair.. i like your imagery.. it soothes yet still is mysterious.
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Thank you
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Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it
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Thank you what mood do you sense? she asks smiling
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nice i loved it
josh -
this was very gggggggooooooooooooddddddddddd. i love the flow and the choice ofwords made it very deep you are very talented.
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beatiful cutiepie!! i do sense a different mood than everyone else for some reason.. not sure. i liked it though!
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Thank you
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Ms Cutie, this is very symbolic - a new you (a deep you). Very nice and thought provoking; I like thank you.
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aww no problem i totally agree!
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Thank you Mary, I am glad you liked it
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Thank you Cassie , music to me is a medicine, it has the power to heal . Thank you for your kind words
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awesome!
yes.. very original.. but it like it! it has this kind of dreamy sequence going on.. i really like it! i do hope you keep on writing! congradulations on a great write! keep on keepin on!
~mary~ -
aw this is really great! its definitely original. i love the way you show your view. through all the symbolism. music can definitely make us feel better, inspire us, and just make everything seem better. This was seriously awesome, you have a lot of talent! keep it up! i love the way this flows, the way its worded, i just freaking love everything about it! LoL
greta job ;-)
*cassie*
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