Lisa is the sunshine girl
Loves the men
Fucks the men
Shines on them
Breaks them
LISA WEARS HER CROWN
fall down fall down
LISA WEARS HER DOUBT
fall now fall now
you were hers and she was best
you loved her but it was just....
she broke you, but you fixed her
fixed her in, fixed the wins
Lisa is smiling
Lisa is blushing
Two endings:
1.
My slutty sunshine
My lights went out sunshine
My forever sunshine
My lonely sunshine
eternal eclipse....
2.
Lisa's pretty tonight
Lisa shines tonight
Lisa's pretty on the inside
Lisa burned out
eternal eclipse....
Author notes
I can't choose which ending i should have...It would be helpful if you told me which one you like more. Thank you. And i am sorry you had to sit through it. Have a good day!
Written August 8th, 2004
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i like this...it kind of confused me, since you hadn't picked your endings yet, lol...i enjoyed it alot...keep up the good work!
chelsea
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It was great, just like everything you write. I am honestly surprised other people have not yet told you this. You are going to be added to my favorites list, Jasmien.
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aww nice.. i like it.. very much :-) keep the great work up...
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