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Bane of my Existance

Zits!!!

UGH, GOD!

Volcanoes

Erupting and

Angry red on my otherwise white cheek

Through steam and cream and scrubbing they stay

Teenage torture

Puberty

Really

Sucks!

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How many people can relate to this?
Written August 8th, 2004

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  • torr revolution
    August 8, 2004
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    LMAO so true...so true


  • Gaffer
    August 8, 2004
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    This is a tetractys, right? I've only ever written one tetractys so my mind is drawing a bit of a blank. In any event, an important aspect of a lot of poetry is whether or not they can speak to the audience. And if your intended audience is adolescents, then it indeed does speak volumes! Wonderfully funny title, by the way. If only your poem was not so true...


  • horrorfanatic
    August 8, 2004
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    good

    i think that everybody can relate to this! this is awesome!


  • Addamer
    August 8, 2004
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    LOL it makes me Laugh ...