The air conditioner drones softly in the corner
But it does nothing to cool the
Rising temperature of our bodies
Your face
Brown and smooth as leather
Fills my eyes
I get high off the smell of your sweat
As it mingles with the smell of Bounce in the sheets
Your mouth
As it meets mine
Like a crashing wave on a shore
Liquefies all my fears
Cover me with those thousand sweet kisses you promised
Your arms
Lock around me
Like some glistening python
Suffocate me!
Let me perish in this sea of pleasure
Thank you
Thank you for giving me this
This
You
Me
Us
Thank you for making me
A woman
Author notes
Written August 8th, 2004
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delicious
Sensual with a hint of daring sprinkled through use of words like "leather", "python" and "suffocate" (or my overactive imagination is at it again!).
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lol, even with the air conditioner running at full blast, it did nothing to cool my hormones whenever I was around my former fiance. This piece reminded me of the week I got to spend in New Orleans with him; (dreams, drifts off and drools) mmm... those were some delectable nights indeed (and especially Valentine's).
I love the visuals painted here--they stand out in the mind, raising the temperatures of us who are usually dormant and nowhere near as heavily aroused 
(now if only there were someone to come and cure this ache!) 
This is lovely. Thank you for your comments!
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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(wipes sweat off brow).....can someone turn that air conditioner on high? LOL
Very hot and steamy piece done with taste.
Excellent write.
Thank you for sharing.
Rodney -
Damn, that's a good poem, so I make you want to smoke pot huh? Not drugs, WEED. It's great, oh yes indeed. Anyway, just thought I would return the favor. Talk to you later. Lucifer420
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hehe..I liked it!!!!!!!! I like the ending...very cool!
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