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Did i?

WHAT HAVE I DONE?
DID I SCREW UP AGAIN?
DID I PUSH AWAY,
MY NEW FOUND FRIEND?

GOD SHE SEEMS SO SPECIAL!
AND SO BEAUTIFUL TOO!
WHY DID I PUSH SO HARD?
OH GOD, WHAT DID I DO?

NO NOTHING PHYSICAL,
NOT EVEN THE FIRST KISS.
SHE DIDN'T NEED ANY OF THAT,
TO MAKE ME FEEL LIKE THIS!

JUST SOME FRIENDLY WORDS,
IN HER SPECIAL STYLE.
THEN I GOT IN MY TRUCK,
AND WENT SOUTH 900 MILES.

WELL THINGS DIDN'T WORK OUT,
QUITE LIKE I'D PLANNED;
BUT IF GIVEN A SECOND CHANCE.....
DAMN STRAIGHT,  I'D DO IT AGAIN!


      Dan Young (Usagold)

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Written August 8th, 2004

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  • fly
    March 15, 2006
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    Good read

    Hey!! You still out there? Been a while for me too>> Things are great and I finally have a litle time to spend on my favorite thing. Poetry!! I can relate to this poem.. It seems sometimes we drive away those we care about the most.. And you are right, given the chance wouldn't we all do it again? Write On!!! Fly


  • loststar
    August 28, 2004
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    sorry dude... maybe things will work out... if not there are more girls out there... never give up ok... hugs..star