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A New Spin

Dancing
Unlocks the storm in me that’s
Forgetting physical inadequacies
As I toss my head about and jut my hips out
Long hair flies
Shut my eyes
Not to see my awkward erratic movements
And only feel the rhythm
Reach down deep into me
To transcend my body
To find beauty where I go
Only music gives me that power

- -spin- -

Only music gives me that power
To find beauty where I go
To transcend my body
Reach down deep into me
And only feel the rhythm
Not to see my awkward erratic movements
Shut my eyes
Long hair flies
As I toss my head about and jut my hips out
Forgetting physical inadequacies
Unlocks the storm in me that’s
Dancing

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Written August 8th, 2004

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  • dark rainbow
    August 8, 2004
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    touching

    That is awesome.I love this poem.It just paints such a lovely picture.Please keep writing.