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Scars: A Lanturne

Scars
White hot
Rivers of pain
Constantly tell the
Truth

Author notes

A lanturne is a poem formed of five lines with the syllable count going 1, 2, 4, 5, 1. The poem is supposed to be shaped like a Chinese lanttern
Written August 8th, 2004

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  • Demented falcon
    August 8, 2004
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    i like the way you wrote it... its rather creative!! good job!!

    ~*~ lil amne ~*~