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Hold Me Tight .

It feels so good to snuggle,
so close to you tonight,
I love it when you squeeze me,
you hold me oh so tight.

I know that I'm not perfect,
you still love me anyway.
you take me everywhere you go,
I am with you night and day.

I love it when you nibble,
on my ear and on my nose,
there isn't a spot you missed,
from my head down to my toes.

I know how much you love me.
I've watched our love grow,
you would be lost without me,
you know I love you so.

I know I'm getting older,
and I look a little worn,
but I still know how to cuddle,
and keep you nice and warm.

I hope you won't forget me,
when you get married someday,
I'll always be your teddy bear,
even when I'm tossed away.
 




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Written August 8th, 2004

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  • AWW! I was thinking of my boyfriend the whole way through and what a joyful surprise at the end! Well done!

    Mylee

  • melphleg gold member
    August 9, 2004
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    aww. As a baby and toddler my teddy bear was my favorite. This reminded me of that. Touching write.
  • CrazedBrownEyes
    August 8, 2004
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    ::tear, sniffle:: This was soo sweet. The rhyming is absolutely perfect. Structure is great and it flows like melty butter. It's very nostalgic and simple and to the point. The imagery is good too. Great write, thanks for entering and lots of luck to you!
    ~candice~