At the edge of my meadow
thru my forest of trees
he watches and protects me
I see him there watching
ready to fight to the death
with any who dare tread on my land
He holds his post with honour
and my fragile heart as well
this man that I so love
He is my gallant Knight
on his black steed
protector of my land and heart
~Tisha~
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Written August 7th, 2004
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The "Do Not Kill" list ey? I have never thought of that one. Well being a Vamp it's my job to maim and kill so that would be an oxymoron for me ey?
. I am very honoured to be on your list sweety, thank you very much.
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Like it, it's got good imagery. Once again I like the picture, the other poem I commented on, that pic was better though... surrealish, yes. Well I thought this poem would be cheesy when I opened it, mostly I guess coz I've had a bad day today, but yeah I really like it and it's all brilliant and stuff. Well anyway, I still havent come across anything of yours that I don't like... Good job. You have officially been put on the 'Do Not Kill' list. Scabboy is on that list too. *thumbs up*
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Sizzling!
Uga Uga... Lol.... anyhow:
Nice poem... silowet (*mispelled) crazed fine! lalabye i am tired (had school from 8:00 to 3:00 but woke up at 6:00 ((in the morning)) and have to work at 5:00 ((in the afternoon)) then get off and go to bed finally lol) anyhow you didnt want to no that did you? -
oooh!! it's a good poem!! lol...and a kool pic!! and by the way ayla.... you know i don't look good in white!! but i do in black!! lol...
~JacK~
(w/fangs!)
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Oh wow. Another great write. I love the picture, and the sense of protection and courage that I vibed off reading this piece. I'm really getting glued to your fantasy writes. The flow was steady and simple, and the layout was strong. Keep these excellent pieces coming, they put me in a dream-like state
Take care as always, Kate 
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Cool picture!!!!!!! lol Beautifully written piece of work. Keep up the awesome work!!!! I hope to read more poems of yours.
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This poem takes me to a place where beauty is sacredly protected. Who ever said the best night was a white knight? I like black knights better any day...I want to know wherethese pictures come from!!!lol Ayla
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aww cute! only one guy has my heart atleast some of it and hes a total badass lol sounds like this guy is to a point wich is completly cool keep writing laterz ~X2c~
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WoW this is the first poem of yours i have read it is amazing you have a beautiful voice it has actually incouraged me to read more
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I like this! It's really sweet, and it sounds really devoted to this knight Very nicely written too.
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Very sweet and awesome poem. I just love reaing your work From StaceyandDoug
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