It's just a start, i haven't thought of anything else yet...
There's a gleam in your eye only she can see
It's a gleam that you know you don't get from me
There's a girl down the street
selling sex for cheap
It's a scar in your eye only i can see.
It's about my friend rachel, she always gets the guy. But she is totally wrong for them. She is kind of a tramp, but she is a good friend as long as guys aren't involved. It's just you know she doesn't get them for the right reason....but i used to love her dearly.
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Written August 6th, 2004
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Just like everyone else has told you, I like it. I think we can use it. Add to it, okay? Bye.
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dang awsome job.. i love ur work.. keep up the awsome and good work..
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This is great...it';s going to become an awesome song.
Amazing job, keep it up!



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