Fraught with storm and blaze,
In rain without compassion
In fire without desire
In love without yearning;
A flower blooming
only to rot away…
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Written August 6th, 2004
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somebody expressed all the fear are same fare
Disillusionment by apurva'a attempt in this poem understanding self with fear and not escaping with the fact expressed. -
very impressive...ur very talented
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Disillusionment by Apurva poem is representing disorder of this world showing willingness to keep order here expressing actual fact in her poem.
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Excellent
You know what somehow i find similarty in ur thoughts with mine everybody says i am on the negetive side but any way its the reciprcal feelings that is mention over here i am diagreeing with Poet Raja not all the flower is able to bloom there are several reason behind it , but ur writing is quite normal and wonderfull ,keep it up
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i LOOVEEEEd it! thanks for the comment on my poem, it was appreciated!
i liked this. short but to the point. this was great! keep it up
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Excellent
Beautiful write but so sad. Flowers blossom to be cherished. You sure are gifted.
Love from India - Joel - -
Bravo!
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