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Signed yours truly

I received your letter today
It left me rather speechless I must say
If those are your feelings and they are true,
Then they made me fall deeper in love with you
You eased my mind, now I'm at peace
With your love my happiness will be complete
Those words I said the other night I did'nt mean
I was so unsure of your feelings about you and me
I love with all my heart and soul
On my heart your death took a toll
I wish I told you long ago
How you make me feel, you make me glow
Now all I have is beautiful memories
Of a man that loved me so intense, so deep
If I had let my true feelings come out
Maybe you would be with me, here in our house
Baby I'm sorry, Those things I said can you forgive?
Your love was the only reason I had to live
Without you now I must survive
I just found out I'm carrying our baby, inside
You'll never know your daughter or son
You won't be here when the big day comes
I hope you still love me after all I've done
I need your support for what's about to come
So tell me baby can you do this for me?
Look down on us from heaven, the baby and me
I Love you always,
Signed yours truly

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Written August 5th, 2004

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  • poetryality silver member
    November 5, 2004
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    This is truly sad and I am glad to know that it is not true. What a hurful experience to lose someone you love. This poem is full of emotions. You keep sharing with us. Very somber, yet very beautiful!

  • sporadicwrites
    August 9, 2004
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    Diamond....I love you! Thanks for stopping by and being so supportive! I am trying my best to make you proud. kisses

  • sporadicwrites
    August 9, 2004
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    Thanks Catressa! I have never had that experience, thankfully. These things just come to me from time to time and I write them down. I will try to post a few things this week, stop by again. Thanks

  • sporadicwrites
    August 9, 2004
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    Thank you so much for stopping by! I'm glad you liked it. Please stop by again, I have a few more things I would like to post.


  • Diamond
    August 5, 2004
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    Superb Write

    I'm drowning in tears here, this is such a bittersweet write. I wish I knew how to make one of those teary eyes characters. OMG! Where and how did you learn to write like this. You have a way with your words that makes the reader feel the hurt and pain. That takes great skills. I need to bookmark this one also. Avril


  • Catressa gold member
    August 5, 2004
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    Oh what a tender write, and sad... If this is true, then my heart feels for you, keep it up and Welcome to the Ap, Catressa


  • August 5, 2004
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    wow, beautifully writen, very sad, but very beautiful.


  • August 5, 2004
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    wow, beautifully writen, very sad, but very beautiful.

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