I have a theory that I would like to share,
we know many people live their lives in despair
but there are only a certain few, who live their lives in a different view.
They know of what will come,
the are the people "normal" people would call bums.
Bi-polar, Skitzo, we are all the same,
God blessed us too, but in different ways
We are his angels in his crazy plot.
We are the ones that get to block.
The crazy paranoia people get
when they enter their death.
The reason we are different is because we don't have angels to show us the way.
He makes us go through this, so that on day, we will be experienced and allow "normal" people to live happy lives,
In some odd way we are their guides.
But god made us crazy for that same reason,
we go through it all and show people the way.
We will get the perks in death.
Life may seem terrible now, but he does it all for a purpose,
and only us wackos are worth it!
Author notes
I don't give a fuck is this is totally opsite of my story, but that jsut poped out my head(the other one).... This is a theory i have beileved in for a long time, I guess I just wanted a reason for why god made me the way I am, and this helps me sleep at night, HAHAHAH YOU FUCKING LOSERS THAT ARE NOT GOING TO BE ANGELS YOU ALL FUCKING SUCK HAHAHAHA!!
Written August 5th, 2004
A contest entry
- DarkWrite Poetry Contest by .
300 points, ended August 13, 2004, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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normal yeah fucking right, how can people be stereotyped as "normal" if everybodies different then normal dont exist, who the hell, thought up that word and meaning anyhow? Love your view on life, or should I say death, refreshing to think we may be the ones that take flight in the end, and really make a difference. Love this write nice job
Cheers for the read and comment on my poem, and it's about rape, all that he took, the life he took, life before he settled his moment of greed, and all that she got, this fucking life of pain... shes living a life he stole... ah dunno makes sense to me, but yeah i like people to take what they want from my shit, so anyways thanks hun
Luv
Lau xx
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This was great! Although I don't believe in God, we are all crazy! Muah ha ha ha ha (my mum was in an institute)
There's no such thing as normal, so what's a "normal person"??
Great write, makes you think, I think...
Georgia
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thus was a fun read, and I guess I am trading in my wings for a decent house nad some steady food, but hey, I always put money in the cups and hats of the homeless and the needy, so maybe i can get a motorized glider to tool around on...lol
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hi. this is a great theory and a wonderful write you have here. Very nicely done. I am bipolar and things are pretty shitty right now and you lifted me up a bit. Thanks.
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Hi there! Wow....I likey mucho. I like the way you wrote it. You hit a point of reality, something we all can relate to. It speaks a lot of truth and within that truth you rhymed nicely hehe. This was an awesome piece
Thanks so much for commenting on my poem Hurricane. I really appreciate it Thanks again
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We all have Weapons of Mass Delusions. It all depends on how you used them. LOL Great poem by the way. Keep up the good work!
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I liked how much emotion was in this. Writing about a theory was a nice idea. I know that the contest is over, but it looks like the contest actually hasn't been judged yet, so good luck.
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Someone said to me not long ago that.. crazy people are really the normal ones..everyone else is living in some delusion or something like that...lol..
I tend to agree with that statement..
Everybody got their something...some of us just know how to take it more sanely than others is all..
You have a way about you..it's all cool..i just know what you got ahead of you..
hope i get to read your stuff as you "grow" (not talkin' about age at all)
much love & peace
~Pamela
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the are the people "normal" - the first word here needs a y -
Thought you would like to know and edit it. I love your theory, keep thinking and writting. -
Interesting way of seeing things. Thanks for entering.
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y thank you Michelle! I love you!
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Great theory michelle, it's excellent, and actually makes sence. It's nice to beleive we might be the "special ones" instead of the fucked up ones... Anywhoo, great job, nice thought, i'm glad you put this on here. I find it often that I think of why god made us this way... This puts me a bit at ease... Well, g2g dad's bitchin... again, Great job!
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